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Timed BCR author’s message

Well the author’s message is to help their city make people feel safe in their own homes and neighborhood. They gave kids under the age of 17 a curfew so they would be safe at their homes with their parents so they could stop being crimes about about little children dying. The crimes that were going on became too personal for everybody to know about stop children for violating their curfew hours go in the house when they are suppose to. That is what I think the authors message is.

Score 1

In that BCR I could of wrote more about what happen in that BCR and I could of made it longer and make some of my spelling correct. I should of explain what happen in the story that is what I could of did to make my BCR more better and to get a better score