Macketta+BCR++1

__ T i m e d B C R # 1 __ __ A u t h o r ’ s M e s s a g e__   I think the author’s message was you don’t have to commit crimes to have good & fun time. I know this because in the beginning of the Story the mayor talked about how children were dying citizens did not Feel safe in there own homes. The number were staggering”. This is probably b/c kids (youths) could stay out whenever they wanted.Or go home whenever they wanted. So that’s why the mayor decided To have a curfew from 8pm-6am. For children under 17. Then have a center for parents & children. After 90 days overall crime dropped by 14.6 percent. Which is what the author was trying to say to the readers? There is no need to commit a crime to have FUN! Pretty much like this quote.” There’s more to life than just crime! SO DON’T DO THE CRIME IF YOU CAN’T DO THE TIME! Score: 3 

__Reflection__ I think if I gave extension like making an inference on why the mayor made a curfew. Or if I gave an extension saying why it was good for them to make a curfew because the improvement of people dying got much better. I think I did a pretty good job overall just that if I made an extension. Another thing I could have added to my BCR to make it a three is, fixed someone of my grammar because some of my sentences made no sense at all. These are the reasons that I got a three. By: Macketta Johns 



