Deymarie-BCR+1

Timed BCR # 1 Author’s Message The author’s message is you can do anything if you put your mind to it. The mayor had come up with a curfew law because of the crime. She/He tried to make a better place for citizens and succeeded. The crimes drooped lower which is an improvement. She/Hemade a difference to keep people safer with less crime going on. She/He was not going to give up until he/she found a way to solve the problem. He/she was determined. He said, “The ultimate civil liberty is the right to feel safe in our streets to have confidence that our children can go to school safely.” He/she came up with a good idea. Score: 3 Reflection: I didn’t get a 4 because I failed to extend which means I didn’t make an inference or a connection. I also felt that I didn’t put enough quotes because I only put one. I think I did a good job answering the question and put some detail into it so that’s why I got the A part. So overall to get a 4 I would’ve had to put more quotes, explain myself more, and support my quotes. I am happy with my grade, I thin k I did a pretty good job especially since this was the first BCR we did. quotes. I am happy with my grade, I thin k I did a pretty good job especially since this was the first BCR we did.