Timed+BCR-8+Something+else

Timed BCR number 8

This story was written in third person limited point of view. This helped me to better understand what others felt about her, and what she was doing. But the way it was written did not show how she felt about things like when they denied her at the hospital, or when she went to jail. But the point of view did help me a lot with understanding the text.

I got a three on this BCR. I answered the prompt and cited two things from the texted but I did not explain enough. On my next BCR I will be sure to explain my BCR.