Ryan-+BCR+1

BCR 1- Authors message

I think the authors message is to be more responsible because in the story they say that children’s parents are not watching them enough so they are staying out past there curfew. They also say that they are getting into lots of trouble because no one is watching them so they could do lots of crimes. One more thing was that lots of children were dying because no one would watch them so they would be alone.

SCORE: 2

REFLECT: I think I could have added a lot more sentences to make it better.