Emily+ECR1

**__ SCORE: LU100,W100 __** On September 13th 2009 a zombie broke into a local 7-11. The zombie apparently walked in and took some chips. witnesses say that the zombie was accompanied by a pet rock. Others say they believe it was just a set up. The zombie wore black clothes and a yellow tie. Investigators say the zombies pet rock broke the glass to the 7-11 on 5th street. Apparently, the zombie goes by the name of “Pablo” Thirty Frederick residents quickly left Frederick after the zombie accident. While others say “Frederick will never be the same!” This is a big change and a disappointment to Frederick, and security systems on 7-11s, others thought. 7-11 will not reopen until the zombie and partner in crime “pet rock” have been found and captured. If you have seen this zombie, please call the Frederick Sheriffs police place. They will help in capturing the Pablo the zombie, and friend/partner “pet rock” at 3015552173(:   “This has changed life in Frederick as we know it.” Said the frightened 7-11 owner.     Please help find Pablo the Zombie, and his pet rock. Thank You.    REFLECTION:    I got a 100 because I used good language usage. And used very good writing skills. Also, I think I got a 100 because, i am just good at writing newspaper stories. Lastly, I think I got a 100 on this because I kept the story different, and unique.
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