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T i m e d w r i t i n g - B C R 1 ( a u t h o r s m e s s a g e )    Tori Turner 9/15/09  Red class The authors’ message in our __juvenile curfew is working.__ Is to teach people to have a town curfew for the younger kids so there is less crime and better things for the kids! The reason that it was made is because there were so many crimes, this part of the text shows! “//Armed robbery (down 29 percent) then murder (down 26 percent)”// that was a huge change according to the 1994 mayor! The change of juvenile criminals is like how much warm it gotten! Not a huge change but it sure did something. The reason and meaning also authors message is to keep kids doing something so they don’t do anything bad! Grade: 2 I suppose I got the grade that I got which is a 2 is because I didn’t put enough content from the text and it was kind of sloppy meaning that I kept repeating myself and I skipped most of the time like I would change the subject to quick that may be why I have gotten a 2 Sincerely, Tori Turner