Omar-+BCR+2

TIMED BCR 2 SCORE 2 The theme in the ugly duckling is don’t judge people how they look.(this ugly duckling can be one of mine.)The mother in the ugly duckling she was not happy because all of other eggs then the brothers well not play with the ugly duckling because she is so ugly after few moths the ugly duckling shaped to be a pretty swan then all the people said she was pretty and she fly south with other swans. Improvements to get a 3 or 4 I think that I need to eliminate lots of none sense and repents and explain and make a concatenation to get a 3 or 4.