Ricky-+BCR+1

TIMED BCR 1 AUTHORS MESSAGE The authors message in the story is that crime is not right to do because you are breaking the law and that a lot of people do crimes and break the laws. For example, a lot of robberies and murders have went down 29 percent down. Another example is that a lot of people and parents have called and asked to try to stop whats happening. I think also the authors message is that people don’t feel safe and even in their own home of all of the crimes in the world. I think that’s the authors message because in the story, they talk about crimes and how they try to stop it and how they talk about curfews and juvenile.

SCORE: 2

REFLECTION: I think I got a 2 because I had the answer and the cite( example ) but I didn’t have the explanation in it. I think I would earn a four by having the explanation and by wording it better.