LeannaBostromBcr-5

I think Sarah Cynthia Sylivia Stout is the most plausible. I think Sarah is most plausible because little kids like Sarah don’t like to do choirs. Well neither do I, lots of kids won’t take the trash out, until it gets so bad that you simply must have to. Kids sometimes even after their parents yell at them they still refuse. The text says “And although her daddy would scream and shout, she simply would not take the garbage out.” She still refused after, like lots of kids do. Also the text says “Sarah would not take the garbage out…it raised the roof and broke the wall…ok I will take the garbage out!” after it got so bad, and no body would talk to her, she finally said she would, but it was too late. I can infer that Sarah’s dad is lazy, because he didn’t take the trash out either! I needed to have an E in ACE, which is explain/extend. I could have extended by making a connection. I could have made a connection by saying; I don’t like taking the trash either, but I do have to. Sarah sounds just like me; a procrastinator, I don’t like doing chores but I do eventually have to. So next time I need to add e, in ACE.
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