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Time of writing BCR authors missage
= = ====The authors message is making sure that the community is safe. They make sure there community are safe buy having a curfue. These curfues are safe buy having a curfue. These curfues so far is working, but not to much. Before there was a curfue children were dying and peoples parents would not feel safe in their homes. Parents would drop their kids off at curfue center; parents also had to make sure the kids wouldn’t brake the rules. Sece the curfue is working the crimes have decreased 38%. After 90 days it disposed 14.6%. The curfue violations has not been taken to jail. These people should feel secure in their homes, safe in the streets and that their kids can go to school safly. ====

Score 2: Reflected: I could of thought out what I was going to write before I do it. I could have given more and better evadence to support the authors message. I could make it sound better to read and understand.