LeannaBostromBcr-2

In the story “The Ugly Duckling,” gives a comment on life because it tells readers don’t think after one look at a person they are bad, so I think a good saying would be; “Don’t judge a book by its cover.” Because the ugly duckling was ugly, clumsy, and didn’t look like his brother and sisters. Everyone said “Ew! Look at him, he is so ugly!” But when the ugly duckling grew up he was the most beautiful swan ever. Now everyone was saying “He was little he might have been ugly, but now he is beautiful,” more beautiful than any of his brothers. Everyone taught wrong about the now beautiful sawn, that was the ugly duckling. I needed to extend it (E in the ACE). By making an inference, like saying the ugly duckling’s brothers and sisters probably didn’t out as beautiful as the ugly duckling. Or I could have brought it to my own life. Like saying something like, my mom was ugly when she was little, but now she is beautiful. Just like how the ugly duckling story went. That would probably have gotten me a 4, because I missed the extend, and if I added that it would have made the proper way to write a BCR (ACE).
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